Starbucks Via Instant Coffee, Colombia, Medium Flavor, 13 packets, 1.51 oz

Original passage: "Having lived in the city for many years, I have grown accustomed to the hustle and bustle of urban life. The constant noise, bright lights, and busy streets have become familiar, almost comforting to me. However, there are times when I long for the tranquility of the countryside, where I can escape the chaos and find peace in nature. The green fields, the chirping of birds, and the fresh air are a welcome change from the concrete jungle. I often find myself dreaming of a small cottage surrounded by trees, where I can relax and recharge away from the city's demands."

Revised passage: After many years of living in the city, I have become accustomed to the hustle and bustle of urban life. The constant noise, bright lights, and busy streets have grown familiar and almost comforting to me. However, there are moments when I yearn for the peace and tranquility of the countryside. There, I can leave behind the chaos and find solace in nature. The lush green fields, the melodic chirping of birds, and the crisp fresh air provide a refreshing departure from the concrete jungle. I often daydream about a cozy cottage nestled amidst trees, a secluded retreat where I can unwind and rejuvenate away from the pressures of city living.

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